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Friday, September 20, 2019

Music Story

Hello everyone! This term me and my class have been doing a Music Story! My song is called alone from marshmallow. My teacher said that we can't copy the music. This is my Music Story so yeah bye!


1 comment:

  1. Hello Santannah.I like that you have included some interesting ideas in your story.I remember there used to be bullies at my Primary School so I can understand how this girl is feeling.Maybe next time you could try and make your story flow as it jumped from one idea to another and it was a bit hard to follow.

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