Hello everyone! This term me and my class have been doing a Music Story! My song is called alone from marshmallow. My teacher said that we can't copy the music. This is my Music Story so yeah bye!
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, September 20, 2019
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Hello Santannah.I like that you have included some interesting ideas in your story.I remember there used to be bullies at my Primary School so I can understand how this girl is feeling.Maybe next time you could try and make your story flow as it jumped from one idea to another and it was a bit hard to follow.
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