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Wednesday, July 7, 2021

Descriptive Writing

Konnichiwa readers,
Today I made a descriptive writing. We had to write about what you see, feel, hear, smell and taste. We also had to describe about the tree house or a spaceship. I chose the tree house to describe. I hope you enjoyed it! Please leave a comment.


I was skipping into the impenetrable forest like a normal girl. Above me was a shattered tree house, it was made out of long leaves and wood. The forest was very quiet, like a library. I could see the damaged plants vanishing away by the wind. All I could smell was the fresh lemons beside me. Behind the trees, I could see the sun rising down. The river was sprinkling as I was running past. I could feel the grass spraying dirt on my legs. There were insects everywhere crawling inside their holes. I glanced at the beautiful trees. The color of the leaves were dark brown mixed with orange. I started to feel my sweat dripping down on my red face. My shoes started to stink like there were flies flying around. The wind kept blowing my hair like it was a hairdryer. I felt the branches breaking as I was stepping on them. There were fruits shaking on the trees like there was an earthquake. I could hear the bees buzzing near the trees. The bursting sun felt like it was melting my body like an ice cream. I stopped walking and enjoyed the moment in the forest.

Thank you for seeing this post.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Santannah,
    I really like your post but I don't have any advice for you,
    Bye Bye.

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