Hello readers,
Today I have made my own writing. It's about a girl being followed by someone she didn't know, and then she realized it was her parents. Here is the story!
Thank you for looking at my post! Have a great weekend! :D
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello readers,
Today I have made my own writing. It's about a girl being followed by someone she didn't know, and then she realized it was her parents. Here is the story!
Thank you for looking at my post! Have a great weekend! :D
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
WOW Santannah.Your story almost had me shivering in my seat...I'm glad I wasn't reading your story at night,it would of just about terrified me!
ReplyDeleteL like that you included punctuation.It showed me when someone was talking and made your story easy to read.
Well done and have a great week.